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Hamthena Chapter 1

Page history last edited by Mokona Go 14 years, 1 month ago

Cyrus hurried along the corridor. He turned a corner and stopped in front of the pair of huge wooden doors. Placing a paw on the handle, he slipped inside the dining hall. Breakfast was in session, and all the mice in the kingdom were chatting and enjoying a hearty meal. Jugs with the freshest apple juice were being passed around, with an occasional spill from someone's cup. Every thing was in order for the mice of the kingdom of the moonlight as they got up, still laughing from a former joke, and excited from the hall to commence the daily chores.

But something was out of place.

Comments (7)

I dunno if I should rewrite this or not...
I'll edit like the dickens after I finish typing the millions of pages i've already written, so don't bother me about it until the then. (That'll be around cha. 4, btw)

as you write, already start editing. change things the moment you feel like they should be changed. in my opinion, thats actually the best part of moving things from paper to computer. so edit like crazy while you can.

i AM
this isn't the original script.