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Legend

Page history last edited by Sweeten101 14 years, 1 month ago

When comes

The breath of life

He stirs

Waking, aching

And then a yell

Sounds in the night

Leaving the boy

To ponder, ponder

The battle goes on

Surrounding him

Legend in the making

Crying, dying

Boots come at the boy

Hands lift him

Gently cradling

Rocking, rocking

The Legend survives.

Comments (8)

hahahahahaha. Not too shabby, if I do say so myself

OMG ITS MOSES okay no i have no idea if that's true. but whatever. cool.
i'd like it better if, instead of "surrounding the boy", it was "surrounding him".

thx
i have no idea who its about.
if u want it can b about moses

ahh, rereading it again i'm starting to like "ponder, wonder" or "wonder, ponder" better. i really should stop criticizing this, huh. they're all small things. but it's always the small things that annoy the heck out of me. *gasp, realization. am i...a perfectionist!!?? *shock