The Wilderness’s Call
Deep in a hidden chamber,
A girl sat chained to a wall,
Her head down.
Her will had been nearly crushed,
Hope was foreign to her,
Yet somehow music played in her heart.
A haunting tune,
Lyrics indecipherable but soothing,
Floated on the breeze.
They sang to her,
Called to her,
Lilting gently.
She cautiously raised her head,
Taking in the refined song,
Yearning for more.
The poignant melody
Resounded deep in her heart
Beckoning her.
The girl stepped forward in a trance,
Her chains pulling at her wrists,
Hindering her movement.
A frustrated growl broke out,
The song was summoning her,
Yet she was unable to follow.
Days passed,
The melody increasing in strength,
And the chains losing force.
After an eternity of gentle pulling,
The chains broke,
And the young ‘witch’ escaped.
She followed the sound
The sound of freedom,
The sound of bliss.
It pulled her further away,
Away from her home,
Away from the town of traitors.
Finally she reached the source
Of the music
That had so pulled at her heart.
It was the natural and the primitive
The untamed part of her
That had so been attracted to the call.
Once in the borders of the haven
The girl did finally feel free;
Here was a place she could be who she wanted!
No more injustice, no more pain,
This place was a forgotten part of her,
An ancient and neglected part.
It was now that she understood
Why she had so been drawn to the harmonious summon;
Here at the source of the call did she comprehend.
The source was the wild,
It had been the call of the wild,
And so the girl answered that call.
Comments (14)
Volkes_Wagon said
at 10:48 pm on Jan 10, 2010
gah.
did you write this after reading Brd Song or something? unsatisfied with the ending?
gah.
Ava Knight said
at 5:34 pm on Jan 11, 2010
sorry.
ur poem was so inspiring, though.
u should b flattered.
Volkes_Wagon said
at 6:28 pm on Jan 11, 2010
*blush
im not flattered. what makes you think i should be?
*blush
Sweeten101 said
at 6:10 pm on Feb 10, 2010
was this the poem u did for the call of the wild? thats really really good.
Volkes_Wagon said
at 12:08 am on Feb 14, 2010
oh yeah, avn--shadoe, did mrs. jones say anything about your poem sounding like a continuation of mine? they are pretty different, so probably not...
Sweeten101 said
at 7:19 pm on Feb 26, 2010
darn it a ur such a liar. this isnt depressing
u r not gonna end up like e.a.p.
Ava Knight said
at 3:06 pm on Feb 27, 2010
really? r u sure? did u read the whole 'town of traitors' 'pain and torture' ' in chains' blah, blah, blah? That's in most of my poems look carefully.
Sweeten101 said
at 7:30 pm on Feb 27, 2010
uh-huh
but they all end up happy
well, maybe not all
most
and again ur not gonna end up like e. a. p.
Volkes_Wagon said
at 9:32 pm on Feb 27, 2010
let's hope nobody who doesn't want to become like e. a. p. doesn't, and everybody who does does. cuz there's a reason edgar allan poe's so famous.
Sweeten101 said
at 10:33 am on Feb 28, 2010
v, u actually have a point. i could understand what u were saying for once.
WE SHOULD HAVE A PARTY!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!!!!!
Volkes_Wagon said
at 3:41 pm on Feb 28, 2010
...yay...
am i an alien???? muahahaha
Sweeten101 said
at 9:09 pm on Feb 28, 2010
uh-huh
mwahahahahaha
that is how u spell it
Volkes_Wagon said
at 11:02 pm on Feb 28, 2010
no tis not. kekekekeh. kyahahahahayahyahyahya! ufufuh. i know much *much* laughs. Sheesheeshee!
Sweeten101 said
at 7:35 pm on Mar 1, 2010
again i say, "what???????????"
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