Prelude
[i wanted to tell you this at the same time that martha figures it out, but since the only interesting thing about this story is the irony, i don't have much choice. - ___ - there's a spazz story for you.]
okay, forget this. pretend i never said all of that. let's just go with exactly what you need to know: this kid named Ame [AH-meh--rain in japanese] fell in love with a girl that he'd bet he'd be able to kiss, and when she found out due to multiple reasons she had to leave and just kind of disappears without a word. so my cute little main-guy-character turns emo and ends up with brain problems. 0 - 0
This story starts three years later, on September 28th, 2009.
Table of Contents
Chapter 1
Comments (14)
Ava Knight said
at 6:35 pm on Mar 12, 2010
are mary and ame based on any real people?
Volkes_Wagon said
at 11:18 pm on Mar 12, 2010
no. the storyline thing came to mind mixing something from Olive's Ocean and, of course, One Piece, but the characters are pretty original...or at least, i think so...
Volkes_Wagon said
at 4:32 pm on Apr 19, 2010
and then along came guys and dolls...
Gnomie said
at 6:48 pm on Apr 19, 2010
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Volkes_Wagon said
at 9:32 pm on Apr 19, 2010
OOOWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mokona Go said
at 10:01 pm on Apr 19, 2010
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mokona Go said
at 5:03 pm on Jun 5, 2010
umm... that makes no sense.
she's like, "hey, this guy likes me? okay, I'll go kill myself now. Bye!"
Volkes_Wagon said
at 10:55 pm on Jun 5, 2010
...huh? what? no i meant she realized it was a bet. as in, no this weird random guy doesn't like me. oh, horror of horrors. - __ - kay, okay, if i ever get to the end you'll see why i put a *supposedly* in there!
Sweeten101 said
at 9:52 pm on Jun 6, 2010
so basically, the story is like guys and dolls
cuz a guy bets hell be able to kiss a missionary lady and they end up falling in love...
Volkes_Wagon said
at 4:29 pm on Jun 7, 2010
i know!! ugh!! why must my ideas always be already taken by something i've never even heard of before!!?? like h & i ended up really like avatar!!! occasionally it really is on purpose, but...
Sweeten101 said
at 8:04 pm on Jun 7, 2010
uv heard of guys and dolls...
hint: school play...
Volkes_Wagon said
at 4:14 pm on Jun 8, 2010
no i thought of this before guys and dolls...it was Olive's Ocean...
Sweeten101 said
at 10:35 pm on Jun 8, 2010
still, its the same story line.
thats wat i ment
Volkes_Wagon said
at 10:38 pm on Jun 8, 2010
yeah, yeah. *sighs. where did my originality go!?
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