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Rainfall

Page history last edited by Mokona Go 14 years, 4 months ago

The clouds are heavy

Cold air rushes in

Smothers the earth.

The water falls,

slowly at first.

Faster, faster,

clensing the earth.

Tears of the sky

falling

to remind the rulers

of the pains of the poeple

the deprssion, the weeping

for lost love

and heart ache.

I look to the sky

my own tears joining

the thousands of souls'

lamenting with me.

Comments (6)

Mokona Go said

at 7:18 pm on Feb 23, 2010

I think this is a poem, but I'm really not sure.

Mokona Go said

at 7:45 pm on Feb 23, 2010

I think this will be the specific tone poem.

Volkes_Wagon said

at 11:15 pm on Feb 23, 2010

..............hey, mokona.
you're putting all your stuff in my folder. be more careful, please.

Mokona Go said

at 11:16 pm on Feb 23, 2010

i'm not...
i'm putting it on mokonago's work page...

Volkes_Wagon said

at 8:44 pm on Mar 17, 2010

it could be free verse, though. its very free verse.
but it's in my folder!!!

Sweeten101 said

at 7:32 pm on Mar 18, 2010

what r u talking bout v

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