The clouds are heavy
Cold air rushes in
Smothers the earth.
The water falls,
slowly at first.
Faster, faster,
clensing the earth.
Tears of the sky
falling
to remind the rulers
of the pains of the poeple
the deprssion, the weeping
for lost love
and heart ache.
I look to the sky
my own tears joining
the thousands of souls'
lamenting with me.
Comments (6)
Mokona Go said
at 7:18 pm on Feb 23, 2010
I think this is a poem, but I'm really not sure.
Mokona Go said
at 7:45 pm on Feb 23, 2010
I think this will be the specific tone poem.
Volkes_Wagon said
at 11:15 pm on Feb 23, 2010
..............hey, mokona.
you're putting all your stuff in my folder. be more careful, please.
Mokona Go said
at 11:16 pm on Feb 23, 2010
i'm not...
i'm putting it on mokonago's work page...
Volkes_Wagon said
at 8:44 pm on Mar 17, 2010
it could be free verse, though. its very free verse.
but it's in my folder!!!
Sweeten101 said
at 7:32 pm on Mar 18, 2010
what r u talking bout v
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