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Page history last edited by Mokona Go 13 years, 3 months ago

I cradled him, slowly.

I fed him, gently.

I sang to him softly.

I gave him the warmth

And love I felt toward him

But all in vain. I felt my heart,

delicate and fragile

shatter from the remorse of death.

No more was he,

Just a cold empty shell.

His soul I had loved

Gone to a place of peace

beyond my reach.

My tears water

The flowers and grass

That cover him.

But it is only clay.

I turn from the past.

He has gone

and I will see him

someday, when I too,

will walk the path of death.

I love you still, and you will never be replaced

by the fancies of the world in my heart.

Thank you, Hamstar, my first hamster.



yes, I did cry when he died. And, yes, I tore up a patch of grass to plant on his grave. (Mom wasn't very happy about that.)

Comments (16)

Mokona Go said

at 7:44 pm on Feb 23, 2010


Volkes_Wagon said

at 11:01 pm on Feb 23, 2010

aawwwwwwwwwww...Hamstaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrr *cries
i knew it was an elegy the moment i saw the title. seriously, "Death"...why not "Hamstar, My First Hamster"?

Mokona Go said

at 11:07 pm on Feb 23, 2010

i needed a title quickly so I could start writing it...

Volkes_Wagon said

at 11:13 pm on Feb 23, 2010

try not to do that. the only way to change them is to ask shadoe's permission. and that's...................
.................................................um. so do you think it's gonna rain? *abrupt change of topic strategy

Volkes_Wagon said

at 11:14 pm on Feb 23, 2010

hmm. am i working in the wee hours of the night right now?

Mokona Go said

at 11:15 pm on Feb 23, 2010


Sweeten101 said

at 11:24 pm on Feb 23, 2010


Volkes_Wagon said

at 5:20 pm on Mar 1, 2010

aaaavaaaaa it's still in my folder. it was all hazel's fault, but still.

Mokona Go said

at 5:45 pm on Mar 1, 2010

no it wasn't!

Volkes_Wagon said

at 8:46 pm on Mar 17, 2010

it kinda sucks...im scrolling through and then, bam. Death.
when i first saw it i didn't remember if id written it or not...and i was thinking how i never knew how emo i was...

Sweeten101 said

at 7:33 pm on Mar 18, 2010

ITS NOT IN UR FOLDER V!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Volkes_Wagon said

at 7:56 pm on Mar 18, 2010


Sweeten101 said

at 9:38 pm on Mar 18, 2010

uh huh

Sweeten101 said

at 9:39 pm on Mar 18, 2010

o that folder. i went to vws works

Volkes_Wagon said

at 5:31 pm on Mar 20, 2010

yeah...and if you scroll down, you also see rainfall there.

Mokona Go said

at 5:41 pm on Mar 20, 2010


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