I cradled him, slowly.
I fed him, gently.
I sang to him softly.
I gave him the warmth
And love I felt toward him
But all in vain. I felt my heart,
delicate and fragile
shatter from the remorse of death.
No more was he,
Just a cold empty shell.
His soul I had loved
Gone to a place of peace
beyond my reach.
My tears water
The flowers and grass
That cover him.
But it is only clay.
I turn from the past.
He has gone
and I will see him
someday, when I too,
will walk the path of death.
I love you still, and you will never be replaced
by the fancies of the world in my heart.
Thank you, Hamstar, my first hamster.
P.S.
yes, I did cry when he died. And, yes, I tore up a patch of grass to plant on his grave. (Mom wasn't very happy about that.)
Comments (16)
Mokona Go said
at 7:44 pm on Feb 23, 2010
elegy!
Volkes_Wagon said
at 11:01 pm on Feb 23, 2010
aawwwwwwwwwww...Hamstaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrr *cries
i knew it was an elegy the moment i saw the title. seriously, "Death"...why not "Hamstar, My First Hamster"?
Mokona Go said
at 11:07 pm on Feb 23, 2010
dunno...
i needed a title quickly so I could start writing it...
Volkes_Wagon said
at 11:13 pm on Feb 23, 2010
try not to do that. the only way to change them is to ask shadoe's permission. and that's...................
.................................................um. so do you think it's gonna rain? *abrupt change of topic strategy
Volkes_Wagon said
at 11:14 pm on Feb 23, 2010
HEY WAIT WHY IS THIS IN MY FOLDER!!?? MOKONA WHAT DID YOU DO!!??
hmm. am i working in the wee hours of the night right now?
Mokona Go said
at 11:15 pm on Feb 23, 2010
YUP!!!
Sweeten101 said
at 11:24 pm on Feb 23, 2010
NOPE!!!
Volkes_Wagon said
at 5:20 pm on Mar 1, 2010
aaaavaaaaa it's still in my folder. it was all hazel's fault, but still.
Mokona Go said
at 5:45 pm on Mar 1, 2010
no it wasn't!
Volkes_Wagon said
at 8:46 pm on Mar 17, 2010
it kinda sucks...im scrolling through and then, bam. Death.
...
when i first saw it i didn't remember if id written it or not...and i was thinking how i never knew how emo i was...
Sweeten101 said
at 7:33 pm on Mar 18, 2010
ITS NOT IN UR FOLDER V!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Volkes_Wagon said
at 7:56 pm on Mar 18, 2010
YES IT IS!!! SEE THE NAVIGATOR SIDEBAR!!!??
Sweeten101 said
at 9:38 pm on Mar 18, 2010
uh huh
Sweeten101 said
at 9:39 pm on Mar 18, 2010
o that folder. i went to vws works
Volkes_Wagon said
at 5:31 pm on Mar 20, 2010
yeah...and if you scroll down, you also see rainfall there.
Mokona Go said
at 5:41 pm on Mar 20, 2010
sorr-EEEEEEEE
*sarcasm
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