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Death

Page history last edited by Mokona Go 13 years, 9 months ago

I cradled him, slowly.

I fed him, gently.

I sang to him softly.

I gave him the warmth

And love I felt toward him

But all in vain. I felt my heart,

delicate and fragile

shatter from the remorse of death.

No more was he,

Just a cold empty shell.

His soul I had loved

Gone to a place of peace

beyond my reach.

My tears water

The flowers and grass

That cover him.

But it is only clay.

I turn from the past.

He has gone

and I will see him

someday, when I too,

will walk the path of death.

I love you still, and you will never be replaced

by the fancies of the world in my heart.

Thank you, Hamstar, my first hamster.

P.S.

yes, I did cry when he died. And, yes, I tore up a patch of grass to plant on his grave. (Mom wasn't very happy about that.)

Comments (16)

elegy!

aawwwwwwwwwww...Hamstaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrr *cries
i knew it was an elegy the moment i saw the title. seriously, "Death"...why not "Hamstar, My First Hamster"?

dunno...
i needed a title quickly so I could start writing it...

try not to do that. the only way to change them is to ask shadoe's permission. and that's...................
.................................................um. so do you think it's gonna rain? *abrupt change of topic strategy

HEY WAIT WHY IS THIS IN MY FOLDER!!?? MOKONA WHAT DID YOU DO!!??
hmm. am i working in the wee hours of the night right now?

YUP!!!

NOPE!!!

aaaavaaaaa it's still in my folder. it was all hazel's fault, but still.

no it wasn't!

it kinda sucks...im scrolling through and then, bam. Death.
...
when i first saw it i didn't remember if id written it or not...and i was thinking how i never knew how emo i was...

ITS NOT IN UR FOLDER V!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YES IT IS!!! SEE THE NAVIGATOR SIDEBAR!!!??

uh huh

o that folder. i went to vws works

yeah...and if you scroll down, you also see rainfall there.

sorr-EEEEEEEE
*sarcasm

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